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Alexander Marlow's avatar

This was hallucinatory. And frightening. I like this line: the lizard broke the womb. It comes from nowhere

Ramona Moth's avatar

very much enjoyed this, felt like descending.

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

I pretty much enjoyed this - the bayou drifting into an increasingly dark, poetic writing style. A great marsh-like flood.